Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Movie Review

After closely examining the examples of movie reviews in class, write your own movie review. It does not have to be a movie that you love. It could be a movie that you think is terrible (which could turn out to be a much better review than one that you really like).

Follow the examples of movie reviews that we looked at in class. If you want to look at other examples, feel free to do so.

Your opening paragraph should somehow hook the reader. Refer to the examples we discussed in class.

Remember: Movie titles should be in italics.

This post is due by Thursday, February 3rd, 2011. 

Raven Blogging Award: Snapshots

I was very impressed and pleased with your post about snapshots. I can tell that you are working at your writing to make it better. There were several that could have won the award this week!

Christine was the only one to post a picture of herself with a celebrity: Larry the Cable Guy! (2nd Hour)

This is a great picture and post from Navpreet (2nd Hour)

Megan's was very well-written and emotional. (2nd Hour)

Not a picture, but check out this video from Nolan. Very tragic and sad. (6th Hour)

Wednesday, January 19, 2011

POW #2: Snapshots

Photographs are among our most prized possessions. They capture a sliver of time in our lives that we can instantly be transported back to when we look at it. With the invention of digital photographs, you can now take thousands of photos at almost no cost.

Create a blog post about a snapshot. It could be about:
  • A photograph that first comes to mind
  • Your most treasured photograph
  • The photograph you wish you had never taken (or been in)
  • A photograph that taught you something
  • A photograph you most associate with loss; Happiness; A change in your life
You do not have to post a photograph to complete this post, although you may. If you post a picture of someone else, do not include their full name, and please get permission from them first.

My example:

POW #2: Snapshots

This photo was taken on January 11th, 2010 moments after my son, Brady, was born.

The thing I remember the most about his birth was how much hair he had (unlike his father!). He has been a great baby and it was truly a life-changing moment for my family.

I documented the entire last year in a Photo 365 project where I took a picture every day for an entire year. This was a really fun project where I could document his growth over the course of a year. You can check it out here.

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Top Posts: Satire Examples

I am seeing some great examples of satire that you are either finding or creating.

One problem that I alluded to on Edmodo is that some of you did not give enough of an explanation for why it is ironic, hyperbole, etc... You just said something like, "The author is using irony." Explain why!

Also, make sure you are naming and labeling your posts correctly. We should be able to go back and see all of your POW examples grouped together. Follow the directions on my posts.

To be picked for a top post you should go "Above and Beyond" for your post. That means following directions, proofreading, thinking critically, and I can see you have put some effort into your post.

Here are a few great examples:

"Satire Example" (Christine 2nd Hour)

"Republican Satire" (Elizabeth 2nd Hour)

"POW #2: Satire" (Suri 6th Hour) - This is a cartoon Suri created himself.

"POW #2: Satire" (Nolan 6th Hour)

Monday, January 17, 2011

Top blog posts: Hello, my name is...

I enjoyed reading about how you got your name. There were some great stories, and I learned some new things about several of you.


One problem I saw in several posts was a lack of proofreading. Far too many capitalization errors ("I" as a pronoun is ALWAYS capitalized), spelling and grammatical errors. Remember, you are publishing for a global audience. You should put your best foot forward with your writing. These are simple errors that we need to clean up. 

Several people did not publish or do their name post. Please come see me if you have questions about how to operate your blog. I am here to help and I want to see that everyone is successful.

Here are a few posts to check out from your fellow classmates:




Thursday, January 13, 2011

POW #2: Satire Example

Satire: A type of writing that makes fun of human weaknesses. It is designed to bring about social reform.

We are going to begin reading Brave New World, which is a satirical look at society written by Aldous Huxley. To understand the book, we need to understand the concept of satire. There are many examples of satire in pop culture: political cartoons, TV shows (The Daily Show, Saturday Night Live), and movies (Airplane!, The Naked Gun).

Here is a link to many examples of satire.

Remember, satire is different from PARODY.

Your mission: Find an example of satire and post it to your blog. Along with your example, post an explanation of the satire.
  • What is the author making fun of?
  • What techniques are he using? (Irony, Hyperbole, Saracasm)
  • What social change is he trying to bring about?
Call your post: "POW #2: Satire Example" and label it "POW"

This should be completed by Tuesday, January 18th.

Here is my example:


The cartoonist is making fun of Britney Spears and our country's obsession with news about celebrities.

He is using hyperbole to exaggerate the way the characters look. Britney is depicted smoking and drinking Red Bull. Her head is way out of proportion with her body, and she has oversized sunglasses on. The people sitting on the couch are also exaggerated with their looks. There is also situational irony - the woman says that Britney needs to get a life, but she is the one who has been sitting there watching about her for hours.

The cartoonist is saying that we should spend more time concentrating on our own lives, rather than living through the lives of celebrities. If we don't pay attention to shows like TMZ, then maybe celebs won't act out and do outrageous things. As the consumer, we are a huge part of the problem.

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

3P Grading: Parent Questions


I have received several excellent questions and comments from parents about the 3P Grading System that I am using this semester. I am piloting this system this semester, so there are going to be bugs I need to work out. Instead of e-mailing each parent individually, I will address them all on this blog.

Click here if you would like to read Steve Peha's original article about the system. It is a long read, but definitely thought-provoking. This the letter I sent home to all parents.

Here are the questions I received, with my responses:

1. Why are you starting this mid-school year instead of implementing next school year?

I read an article last semester about the inherent problems with grading. The more I read about grading, the more problems I saw in how I was grading and evaluating students. I wrote about this in a post on my professional blog. 

In my opinion, grading is the least effective form of feedback we can provide. It only provides feedback AFTER the learning, when students have already moved on to something else. Instead, I am going to give feedback throughout the learning process.

Simply put, I had to do something. After reading about the problems with grading, I couldn't go on doing the same things I had been doing. Several of my colleagues encouraged me to try out the 3P Grading System this semester. All grades start over at semester, so it was a great time to try it out. If it works, I will implement it from the start next year.

2. Do you include "organization" in the "participation" evaluation?

I had not thought about this, but I would say that it is a part of all three categories. Their blog is acting as their portfolio. If they are not keeping their blog up-to-date and organized (participation), it will be difficult to conference with me to show their performance and demonstrate progress.

3. How may we find our student's blog so as to observe his/her performance in class?

I would encourage you to ask your student for their blog address. In fact, I encouraged my students to share their blog with you. One of the major advantages of maintaining a blog is to reach a bigger audience than just me or their classmates.

They set up blogs in class, and submitted their blog address to me. I can also e-mail you their blog address if you send me an e-mail.  

4. Will your evaluation be weighted compared to the child's self-evaluation in class?

Both of our evaluations are worth 50% of their final semester grade.

For each of our grades:
Participation is worth 50%
Progress is worth 30%
Performance is worth 20%

I will give them a grade for each component, and they will give themselves a grade. I will use a formula to calculate the final semester grade.

However, I don't expect that our grades will be too far off from each other. In other words, I don't expect that a student will give themselves all A's, while I give them all D's. For the most part, we will probably be off by only one or MAYBE two letter grades.

If so, that is why we will conference. They will need to prove to me why they deserve their grade. Perhaps they can demonstrate that they showed progress in one area, and I did not recognize it. I can be convinced to raise my grade from the initial one I assigned if they make a compelling case for it.

5. How will improvement from the beginning of the year be gauged since a different evaluation system was in use?

One philosophy that I try to live my life by is to, "Get a little better every day."

I believe that I can improve as a teacher every day. I also believe students can get a little better every day. What we get better at is unique to each person.

That is the great thing about this system. Student "A" might be really bad at writing thesis statements at the beginning of the year, but by the end they are pretty good. Student "B" might hate Shakespeare and not understand him at all, but by the end of the semester begin to appreciate and understand his writing.

We are all works in progress, and I believe we can continue to show progress and get a little better every day. 

6. By participation do you mean if someone answers a question or gives an idea? Seems it can be subjective if you have a particular student who doesn't LET others participate because they always want to respond.

Yes, that is one part of participation. Here are my expectations of participation:

  • Come to class every day.
  • Be prepared. Have work completed on time.
  • Share regularly. Give good feedback. Ask good questions.
  • Be respectful.
  • Take ownership of your results; be accountable; don’t blame.
  • Ask for help when you need it; use the advice I give you.

As you can see, there are other ways to show participation without speaking up in class.

At work, we are all expected to "participate" and contribute to our jobs. I make a concerted effort to call on each student at least once each day. Some students are much more outgoing and willing to participate. I also understand that some students are shy. I think that is something we can work to improve on (progress) throughout the semester.  

Every year I have students who are scared to speak out in class at the beginning of the year and then really come out of their shells by May. It is really amazing to watch.  This system will reward those students for the progress they make in participation. 

7. I don't see anything about tests. Will there be any?

I have worked hard to eliminate traditional tests from my class. When you think about it, how often do you take a multiple choice test in "the real-world"? The only time I can think of is when you get your driver's license renewed. I'm sure there are other examples, but they are few and far between.

If we aren't expected to take tests in our lives after school, why should we spend time taking them in school?

Therefore, I assess students through projects, real-life writing assignments, class discussions, etc... One exception to that is the Kansas Reading Assessment that our sophomores will take. That is a very important test we are mandated by law to give, so we will spend a great deal of time working on that. I also do ACT prep with my seniors in the fall, and sophomores in the spring.

With that in mind, one way that my sophomores can demonstrate "progress" is through their scores on the reading assessment. We took pre-tests in August and December, and the final test will be in February. Almost across the board, I have witnessed progress in their scores. That is awesome!

I hope this helped answer your questions. Students or parents, please feel free to add questions in the comments section at the bottom of this post. I am here to help you be successful!

Thursday, January 6, 2011

POW #1 Mr. and Miss Courtney

Image via Zazzle.com
I remember nervously entering Mrs. Eckrote's 1st grade class at Morgan Elementary on the first day of school. I was equal parts anxious and terrified to start a new chapter in my school career. First grade was a huge change for several reasons. Rather than just going for half day kindergarten, I would be going to school all day long. This meant I would be eating lunch at school. I would also be meeting the AM kindergarten students, the other half of my class who attended kindergarten in the morning before I went in the afternoon.

However, my excitement was tempered when I discovered that one of my classmates had an almost identical name to mine.

A female student.

My parents named me Courtney Allam after Courtney Rogers, a Hutch High and K-State basketball player. They didn't know him personally, they just liked the name.

You can imagine the teasing and taunting I was forced to endure when I met my female classmate named Cortney Allmon.

Courtney Allam. Cortney Allmon.

It wasn't bad enough that we had the same first name, but our last names were almost exactly the same as well.

My 2nd grade teacher identified us as Mr. Courtney and Miss Cortney. That didn't stop the ridicule from my friends any time someone confused my name with the female Cortney.

Image by Jonathunder via
CreativeCommons.org
Finally, I decided to take matters into my own hands. When 3rd grade rolled around, I informed my teacher on the first day of school that I wanted to be called "Court". Court sounds more like a guy's name, and it means "of the court". You know, royalty and kings. Much more masculine, right?

The name stuck, and I have been going by it for over 20 years. The cool thing is that I don't recall ever meeting another person who goes by "Court".

Male or female.

POW #1: Hello, my name is...

Photo via http://ccr.stanford.edu/blog/
For your first blog post, tell your readers about your name (first, middle or last)
  • Origins of your name
  • History of your name
  • The story of how you were named
  • Advantages and/or inconveniences about your name
  • Why you like/dislike your name
  • Teasing about your name
  • Nicknames
    Name your post: POW #1: (Then give it an original or clever title)

    (POW = Post of the Week)

    Also, tag it POW at the bottom. This will allow you to organize your posts.

    Monday, January 3, 2011

    Blogging Guidelines

    Welcome to a whole new world. A world of blogging! You will have an opportunity to write and express yourself, and have it heard by an audience literally around the world. However, as Peter Parker famously said, “With great power, comes great responsibility.” We should discuss the responsibility you must take on before we begin blogging.

    Olathe District teachers are permitted to generate classroom specific websites referred to as “blogs” for purposes of  providing students with the ability to electronically exchange commentary and/or information related to a particular classroom  topic. The blogs will be generated and monitored by the  respective teaching staff  member in accordance with rules and regulations stated in the Olathe District Student Code of Conduct. Any blog so established is considered a virtual extension of the classroom, and therefore all Olathe District School rules and regulations shall apply. Additionally, any student participating in a blog generated by his or her classroom teacher shall be subject to the following:


    1. Students will conduct themselves appropriately when participating on the blog. Students shall not use any profanity or inappropriate language on the blog, and will not make any obscene, profane, defamatory, libelous, threatening, harassing, abusive, hateful, embarrassing, disrespectful and/or discriminatory comments on the blog.

    2.Students will limit their postings to class-related materials. Students will only post factually correct information, and will try to spell everything correctly and use correct grammar.

    3.  Students will only use their first names. Students will not provide or refer to personally identifiable information about themselves or others, and will not post photographs/videos of themselves or others that is not related to the classroom project.

    4.  Students will keep their passwords secure, and will not permit and/or facilitate any other individual’s access to the blog. Students will be responsible for anything posted in their name. Students will not use any other individual’s name or password to access the blog site.

    5. Students’ postings may be removed or excluded by their teacher, or the administration at any time for any reason.

    6. Participating in the blog site is a privilege, not a right. Participation in or access to the blog site shall not be considered a substitute for classroom participation. Students remain responsible for all assignments, course content, exam preparation included within the class curriculum.

    7. Students who fail to follow these or any additional rules implemented by the teacher, or the administration shall be subject to the revocation of their computer, internet and/or blogging privileges, and may be subject to discipline.